lien planets always looked the same to Colonel Jack O'Neill, who had
yet to be impressed by the towering trees and lush green landscape that
always greeted the team through each Stargate arrival.
eing sarcastic by nature, he did not expect to find anything
different
about the landscape on P4X669, having viewed the preliminary reports from
the MALP, and was shocked by the shifting, surrealistic view that greeted
them as they stepped onto the planet surface.
"
ack away from that edge,
Daniel." Jack said sharply as he noticed out of the corner of his eye that
the
young scientist was peering curiously over the cliff edge near the Stargate,
"We don't have enough rope to haul you back up if you take a header down
there."
ourse Danny Boy didn't listen as usual. "Hey Jack, come look at
this", he called out as he leaned even further out over the edge of the
cliff. The next thing he knew, he disappeared over the edge.
aniel found himself hurtling down the rock face until, abruptly and
painfully he slammed into a ledge thirty feet below. Pain exploded in his
chest and then darkness.
"
xactly what part of back away did he not understand?" Jack muttered
worriedly as he hurried over to the cliff edge. "Daniel, are you okay?" Sam
and Teal'c ran over to the colonel as soon as they had saw Daniel fall.
"
or cryin' out loud," Jack said when he reached the edge of the
cliff, or what had been a cliff, for even as he watched the gorge
he'd seen moments before shifted and solidified into a gently
rolling valley, and Daniel was no where to be seen.
"
reat! Just great!" Jack was beginning to believe that
getting out of bed this particular morning had been a bad
idea. "Teal'C, have you ever seen anything like this?"
"
aving never been upon a planet that was being terraformed, I can
not say
with certainty, but this seems to be happening according to stories told by
those who visited some of the first worlds... Goa'uld technology is capable
of such changes to the surface of planets!" Teal'c answered nervously.
'
s this really what I wanted to hear? * O'Neill said to himself. '
I've
got a nervous Jaffa.' He sighed. 'That's like having a scared Rottwieller.'
"O...kay." The Colonel turned toward Captain Carter. "Okay,
Captain. Snap
out of it. We need info so we can find where Daniel is this time. You got
any ideas what may be going happening on this 'Fun House' planet.?"
Sam Carter nervously nibbled at her lower lip as she look around her.
n the meantime, Daniel woke up to darkness and he panicked as
memories of his parents being buried alive under a ton of rock prophetized
his current situation. He reached out and felt hot air surrounding him but
when he tried to stand, his entire body tensed up and pain flared, rivaling
the heat around him.
ack was about to start calling out once more for Daniel when he spied
a glowing light off the distance where the newly developed valley tapered off
to a plain. Before he could bark out a warning, that light flew right by them
and an agonizing jolt ran through the team's bodies before they collapsed
lifeless on the ground.
'
illing the aliens was always such sport', thought the Unas as he
padded on
huge feet towards his prey.
imp and lifeless, two of the bodies were tossed over the Unas'
shoulder while the bigger one was dragged by the leg as it strode off to
include these strange trophies in its' collection.
eanwhile, deep with in the planet, Daniel had finally made it to his feet;
leaning heavily against the cave wall desperately trying to ignore the pain
surging through his battered body and the stifling heat that threatened to
suffocate him.
o handholds and no footholds meant no way out, so Daniel knew he had to
find another way to join up with his team-mates.
pening his eyes seem to radiate pain into every nerve of his body, but the
sight of his arms dangling behind some huge beast, slung over its broad
shoulders like a sack of meat made Jack opened them wider anyway.
ropping himself against the wall in front of him, he tried to force
his mind
to think of any possible means of escape. Little did he know that with
both Sam and Teal'c captured and Jack missing, Daniel was
*truly* the only hope the team had of getting out of this mess.
'
uixotic, why am I so damn Quixotic sometimes. Always have to be
charging in to see what new windmill I can find to tilt at' Daniel
berated himself as he felt along the walls once more as if doing so
would make a hand hold or escape route magically appear. 'Jack
probably thinks I'm dead..AGAIN and it would serve me right if he
didn't bother to come looking for me this time!'. but even as he
thought this, Jackson had the uneasy feeling his fellow SG1 members
were in some sort of trouble of their own. 'God it was weird how
the four of them were starting to form a link to each other.' Jackson
mused and he was so lost in this thought he was hardly aware of the
gradual whay in which total darkness was shading to grey and things
were changing around him...
'
eally strange...these Tau'ri' the grey shadow thought before
approaching the shivering man again. Daniel didn't look up as the mist
caressed his hair and then pulled back in wonder. 'How unusual. Must have
this one for the tests...' Daniel, now sensing the chill that had come about
the place, was about to turn around when he felt a jolt of pain and
then...more darkness.
ilence, and pain. Teal'c felt it roll over him as consciousness
slowly returned. Opening his eyes, he discovered that he was hanging upside
down along with his teammates. A very large and strange alien held a knife
to Sam's throat, blood starting to well up as it moved the blade along her
neck.
owering ten feet over Carter, the alien was muttering to himself as
he stroked the blade along her throat, not yet realizing that Teal'c was
right now trying to free himself. As the Jaffa spied the strange alien goo
that attached his feet up towards the ceiling, he realized that O'Neill was
also beginning to stir. The colonel opened his eyes in a flash, took survey
of the situation and was about to whisper to Teal'c when a pain filled scream
shrilled out. With a start, the two men realized that the scream....came from
Daniel.
"
NAS!" a commanding hiss echoed through the alien's lair, making it
hesitate and turn from its task of removing the life substance from the
smallest captive. "You will assist us with this subject… it refuses to
submit to insertion of the test probes. You must subdue it!"
'
ena,' Sam thought as she craned her neck to find the colonel; hisshouting
and Daniel's pain filled screams had jerked her back to full awarenessfrom
whatever netherland jolt of energy had sent her. 'Why could I just beXena ,
just give that weird yodel of hers and send those monsters scramblingfor
what ever rock they climbed out from under and leave him alone!!!'
"
ield to the tests, human!!" roared the Unas, ignoring Jack's offer of
sacrifice.
He touched the tool in his hand to Daniel's body, wrenching yet another
agonized shriek from the man. As it worked it mumbled to itself,"Miserable
humans...if this one does not submit, they will not let me finishplaying
with my new toys."
ombie-like, Daniel stared transfixed, silent… as the probes were now
properly inserted, deep within his brain. He no longer felt theintense
pain… he could feel nothing at all. "Good… Unas…," those in darknessvoiced
their pleasure, "Now we shall remove all of its knowledge … so unusual…so
interesting!"
nguish rolled over Jack as he watched the aliens torture his
friend. 'Aw...Danny...' Unable to watch any longer, he glanced
around the chamber. 'Come on Jack, think! How the hell are you
going to get out of this...'
leeding and dizzy, Carter could see Daniel's body go limp as machinery
began to hum soflty and Unas turned back to her, the blood stained
knife once again sliding deeply across her neck as she screamed in pain.
"
arter!" Jack shouted. Swearing, he struggling against the alien goothat
was tacking his feet to the ceiling. Behind him, he couldn't seeTeal'c had
managed to unlace his boots freeing himself from his bonds. Bootless,the
Jaffa charged the Unas with an outraged bellow.
angling still from the ceiling, Jack saw Teal'c hit Unas with a forceborn
of fury and desperation. Seeing Teal'c's bootless feet, Jack followedhis
example and quickly began to untie his own boots. His hands, shakingfrom
exhaustion and fear for his team, fumbled with the laces untilfinally the
boots were loose enough for him to slip out of them and go to Teal'c'said.
ffortlessly, Teal'c picked up the Unas. With muscles bulging, he
lifted it over his head and threw it against the cave wall.
rantically, O'Neill undid the laces of Carter's
boots, her blood flowing over his hands, no
heartbeat beneath the hand laid over her chest.
"
od, don't do this to me, Carter." the colonel muttered as the woman,
now freed, fell into his arms.
e laid her down and with shaking hands, began compressions to
restart her heart. He didn't even notice Teal'c make his way toward
the aliens still working on Daniel.
"
t is not necessary to resort to violence," the beings spoke calmly to
Teal'c, "your companion is free to leave at any time - we must thank you for
his thoughts and knowledge, they have been most stimulating to us. His mind
will require reeducation however. We apologize for the Unas, he is primitive
and may have caused permanent damage to one of your group, this was not our
plan."
ack sat back in relief when Sam suddenly gave a gasp and air filled her
lungs. She was alive, if just barely. Jack turned to see Teal'c walking
back toward him with a very limp Daniel in his arm, the look on the Jaffa's
face however didn't set well with him.
" " " " '
nitting up contusions and lacerations was not Jack's strong point...
aboriously, Carter's chest rose and fell as she struggled to breath, Daniel
lying unconscious next to her while Jack and Teal'c desperately tried to find a
way out of the room which seemed to have no signs of entry points.
other?… Father?… What have you done with them?" the imploring tone of a
lost young child emanated from the scientist. Daniel's eyes darted fearfully
from Jack to Teal'c, and recoiled in horror as he saw Sam's condition, then
he turned and fled from the chamber - effortlessly activating a mechanism
which opened a hidden doorway to the corridors beyond.
ot realizing the situation he was in, Daniel stumbled through the doorway,
away from the people he no longer remembered were his friends.
h, for crying out loud! Daniel!" Jack looked from Sam to the
place where Daniel had disappeared in indicision. He knew he needed
to go after Daniel but he couldn't leave Sam...
lease go after him, Sir", Sam gasped as she opened her eyes. "I'll
stay with her, O'Neill," Teal'c offered. "We'll follow after you if,
and when, Captain Carter can move."
uickly Jack jumped up and ran after Daniel, but when he got outside, the
man was nowhere to be seen. Only his footprints were on the ground, Jack
started to follow them, running as fast as he could.
eaching deep within himself, he put all his remaining reserves of energy
into trying to catch up with the fleet footed anthropologist, knowing if he
was to have any hope of catching up with Daniel Jackson, it would be in the
next few minutes.
kittering to a stop, Jack could hear muffled sob from just up ahead.
Slowly, Jack crept around the corner as saw Daniel, hunched over and squeezed
into a small hollow in the rock wall like a lost, frightened child.
Heartbroken sob shook the younger man's hunched shoulders. 'What did they do
to him?' Jack wondered as he cautiously crept forward.
urning his palms upward to show he was no threat, Jack slowly made
his way toward his huddled friend. Gently coaxing Daniel out of his
hiding space, Jack suddenly stiffened, not knowing what to do as
Daniel wrapped his arms around Jack's waist in a desparate hug.
seless as it might be, Sam asked Teal'c to help get her on her feet.
He thought she might be too weak to be up but she said, "Help me get up.
I want to be on my feet when we face these new aliens and find out what
is going on. I can't believe they just sat there and allowed us to be
tortured."
ery cautiously, realizing that right now, Daniel possessed the mind of a
very small child, and unsure of the other man's reaction, Jack put his arms
around Daniel and whispered to him reassuringly. " Mama, papa, where are
they?" Daniel whimpered, his head pressed tightly to Jack's chest. "Don't
worry Danny, we'll figure this all out and get you back home," Jack replied
softly, hoping the words he'd just spoken were not a lie.
atching from a remote place, the aliens whispered among themselves. "These
Tau'ri handle mental and physical distress in most unusual ways. Perhaps we
should further experiment on them."
erophytic shubs scattered the ground on the planet's surface. Sam,
who had recovered enough to walk without Teal'c's support scanned the
barren landscape. She followed the Jaffa as he pointed to the
footprints etched into the ground, obviously belonging to Daniel and
the Colonel.
ou stay away from me!" Daniel cried out as he saw the shadows approached
Jack. He wrapped his arms around himself and shivered as the soldier paid no
heed to the intruders, only to Daniel as he placed one hand on top of the
sandy hair and pressed the face to his jacket to shield him from the sight.
ealously, Jack brought his weapon up and turned to face the threat.
All without losing hold of Daniel. Shadows, all he saw were shadows.
How could they be this awful threat Daniel was so afraid of.
lbuterol?' Jack thought as the smell slowly
registered in his mind. He had a friend when he was
nine named Jimmy, who had asthma. They had been
fooling around one day playing truth or dare. Jack
had been dumb enough to take a dare from him. He had
to take two puffs from Jimmy's inhaler. It made his
head swim and almost take a swan dive. The smell had
stayed with him all these years. Jack shook his head
to clear it of the memory. That was when he noticed
how hard it was getting to concentrate. The gun
dropped from his hand just before he slumped onto the
ground, dragging Daniel with him. He never felt the
shadows as they wrapped around him and Daniel to carry
them off.
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